A day in my life usually starts when I hear the alarm ringing and I say usually because sometimes I decide to stay for a couple more of minutes which then turns into seconds,Then I eat my daily breakfast, prepare my lunch and head over my bath to take a shower, then out of nowhere its time to go to school.
I arrive to school very early so I have time to either sleep or do last night's homework, time between classes flies by, but I still try to enjoy it. Around 2:30 the bell rangs and what seems to be over is just getting started.
I arrive to my house to say hello and eat literally, then I head over the school's soccer camp to train
from 4 to 6 with a strong sun as usually, but still with a great atmosphere in the team, I forgot to mention I always buy a bottle of gatorade before the practice and gives me a boost.
Then I come back to my house trying to finish my homework after the soccer practice and all of the sudden the night comes and I eat dinner but my sleep is on the way.
Grammar errors.
ResponderEliminarAlso, although transitions are present you only use "then" you should use other transitions also.
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